Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Murder by bats, a 100 word story

Waking up is not easy, but when you wake up on sharp rocks and in the dark it's way worse. It had to be that acrid odor. “Hello?” My voice is the only response.


The cave entrance is only about 100 yards away. The stench of ammonia is gagging me


Something crackles in my ear, “Now, I am waiting for you at the mouth of the cave.”


There he is, suit, hat, and sunglasses.


I walk quickly, the ammonia over powers me. Falling down in the foot deep layer of bat shit I gasp for air.


Everything going black … he laughs …

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